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Criticized and judged,
  I stand here alone,
    not knowing what to do,
      or where to go.

Criticized and judged,
  I stand here alone,
    thinking to myself,
      What did I do wrong?

Criticized and judged,
  I stand here alone,
    crying and shaking,
      with a pang in my heart.

Criticized and judged,
  I stand here alone...
Just something I came up with while watching The Glee Project...
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TheSignofLove Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
reminds me of........me :)
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Ky1ieSmy1ie Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
this poem reminds me of my childhood.... >.> nice job tho : )
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chip-munk Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2011
Oh! Abbie. I had another dream about you last night.

I went to the front of your house with my brother, and then you stepped out and said "Did you know that things with red and white hair means they're adopted?" and then you pointed to a red and white house, and then went into your house and brought out a white and red-ish brown dog. You asked Brett and me if we could help name her. I thought of the name Sylvia, and I was about to say it but then I woke up... and then I continued thinking of names for the dog. I came up with Ruth, Anna, and a few other names I don't remember.
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ElephantsElephants Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2011  Student Writer
Wow..
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chip-munk Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2011
I know.
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willyoudieforme Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2011  Student Filmographer
Amazing :):):)
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ElephantsElephants Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you :)
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willyoudieforme Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011  Student Filmographer
You're welcome :)
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Denee-nee Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011  Student Writer
never watched it (don't wanna ruin the surprise when glee starts back XD) but i'm amazed you got a poem of such strong emotion from the show which can be applied to so many situations in life. i like it ... especially the repetition of lines.
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ElephantsElephants Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you so much!!!!
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