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Let me hold your hand

  and never let go


Let me kiss your lips

  and feel your breath on my neck


Let me embrace you

  and forever feel your warmth


Let me love you

  and never have to part with you




Ever
Just something I wrote in my class...
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:iconpinkapplestain:
pinkapplestain Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011
amaizing!!!!
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:iconjakfan15:
Jakfan15 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this is sweet
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:iconcreatedwithpassion:
createdwithpassion Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
aw!
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trixief98 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2011
Lovely poem I love it it is so emotional an that's good :)
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:iconelephantselephants:
ElephantsElephants Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2011  Student Writer
Thanks!
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:iconwillyoudieforme:
willyoudieforme Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2011  Student Filmographer
WOW, amazing poem :)
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:iconelephantselephants:
ElephantsElephants Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2011  Student Writer
Thanks you so much!
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:iconwillyoudieforme:
willyoudieforme Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2011  Student Filmographer
Your welcome :)
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VivaFariy Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2011
Hey, that sounds like something from the book I'm reading. It's not, just the sort of thing they might say. It's nice
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ElephantsElephants Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2011  Student Writer
Thanks!
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