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I looked into the mirror

feeling utter despair


I stared at the tears

staining my face


I looked at my upside down lips

shaking uncontrollably


I grabbed the knife

sitting on the sink


I drew two piercing red lines

One on my right wrist,

and one on my left


I jumped into the bath

waiting…

Waiting for my life

to

be

over

.

.

.
Not true... but I wrote this when I was stuck on my novel... I'm not stuck anymore :D
Comments and favorites are welcomed :D
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Ky1ieSmy1ie Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
very impactful(i think thats the word to use) :clap: good job
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chip-munk Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2011
Good night.
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Firesonic152 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2011
I remember when Dr. Laskowich taught us this... XD
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chip-munk Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2011
I remember that, too!
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Firesonic152 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2011
YAY
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ElephantsElephants Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2011  Student Writer
XD
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lolinamechanger Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011  Student Artist
....touching poem....n i mean in a good way!
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ElephantsElephants Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you!
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lolinamechanger Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011  Student Artist
ur welcome! ^^
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atlantic-lungs Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011  Student Writer
I don't usually like suicidal poem or about implying cutting
but yours has convinced me
teheheee
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