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I'm sorry I made you
my mistake.

You were just a whoops
for me,

but I was
a heartbreak for you.

I'm sorry it took me a while
to realise

that you
weren't for me

and that you
would never be.

I take
full responsibility

for the mistake
I made.

And I'm sorry
that it had
to be

You.
:/

(It's Summer, and I'm the happiest person alive... Mainly because of a certain someone....)
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MMBWY Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Lovely poem, and I agree with Inhiv :P
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MMBWY Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
But I think it looks more like a pulse
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ElephantsElephants Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2011  Student Writer
I agree, and thanks!!
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lnhiv Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
It looks like a soundwave if you look at it sideways, kinda like the media player visualizations do, lol.

I love the way you arranged the line breaks, they seem to allow some of the emotion to bleed through while reading.
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ElephantsElephants Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2011  Student Writer
Thanks!!!
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Majcen007 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Good for you... lve the poem! :)
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ElephantsElephants Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2011  Student Writer
Thanks!!
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Majcen007 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
np! :)
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NiallCloud Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful.
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ElephantsElephants Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you so much!
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